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Final Products

Final Front Cover

 Final Contents Page

Final Double-Page Spread

Updated Version of Contents Page

This is my updated version of my contents page. For this I started completely from scratch. The design of this contents page is a lot different to my first draft. I did this because I wanted to have a fresher outlook on what a contents page looks like. So by doing two different designs, it makes it easier to compare them both.

Instantly, you can see that the colours coordinate and are balanced on the page. There is also a head-liner that has nothing to do with the main image (Taylor Swift) - this is conventionally done on a lot of researched contents page products. It makes the reader interested in two things at once, thus making them want to read forward and buy the magazine. Secondly, I have in-putted 3 more photos to balance out the amount of content on my page. Therefore, there is now more visual information for the reader - therefore making it more interesting.

Updated Version of my Front Cover

This is my updated version of my Front Cover. I have made some changes to my design as I felt it did not look as professional as I would have liked. One change evident straight away is the name of the band and the placement of the festival plug. I felt as if there was a lot of empty space at the top of my Front cover that left all the information around the sides look as if they were floating about with not much use. therefore, to fill that black, I moved the festival plug to the right hand side, therefore leaving room for a new Headline. Firstly, I changed the headline as I felt like the text was mis-matched and did not fit the conventions of the type of band that feature in my magazine. The black and white was too fussy and made the text seem pop-arty and childish. Also, my headline was way too small on my previous draft and I didn't think it stood out well to my audience. Therefore I changed the font and the size to fit in with both my magazine layout and the band.

The subheading 'How they conquered a nation' looks as if it has been shattered, I did this to fit in with the idea of conquering. Just like the double-page spread, they may have won over the public with their music, but they had a hard time recovering from fame. It an symbolise the slight downfall and shattering of the band but also represent the conquering of their nation.